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bloodletting by =poet77:iconpoet77:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Spoken Word


Only traces of her remain,
odor of sage in this
ancient bower.
shafts of light
passing through a canopy of foliage
and visions,
engrossing hearts
with it's pale embrace.
nothing is moved by love alone.
distance-
a blanket of heavy silence.
I rage and wound the stillness,
dance in savage passion,
flailing
striking my naked body
to the earth.
groveling beast,
primordial release,
bloodletting words
page after page-
for her return.
©2008-2009 =poet77
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C. D. this is not about a woman. care to guess?
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=mythicaldamienne:iconmythicaldamienne: Feb 22, 2008, 2:25:15 AM
Hmm..I would say the moon. But then again..I am probably wrong.

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To achieve the marvelous, it is precisely the unthinkable that must be thought.
=deviouslili:icondeviouslili: Feb 22, 2008, 5:17:34 AM
La Luna it is. One could even refer to "Wolf Moon" by Type O Negative in this instance.

But that's just me.

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Be.
~wh0rem0ans:iconwh0rem0ans: Feb 22, 2008, 5:20:17 AM
I see and smell the sweat lodge ...do you there pine for the muse?

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Let the beauty of what you love be what you do. There are a thousand ways to kneel and kiss the earth. (Rumi)
=poet77:iconpoet77: Feb 22, 2008, 8:17:54 AM
well done as usual. how are you? C.

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to the strangest life Ive ever known
=poet77:iconpoet77: Feb 22, 2008, 8:22:35 AM
the muse of course. C.

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to the strangest life Ive ever known
=poet77:iconpoet77: Feb 22, 2008, 8:23:27 AM
the muse, darling, the muse. C.

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to the strangest life Ive ever known
=deviouslili:icondeviouslili: Feb 22, 2008, 8:28:20 AM
I -am- the Muse in my world.

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Be.
=poet77:iconpoet77: Feb 22, 2008, 8:46:11 AM
well that takes all of the tragic romance away. a muse needs to be sensual, unpredictable, and at the same time climbing up your leg. at least for me. C.

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to the strangest life Ive ever known
=deviouslili:icondeviouslili: Feb 22, 2008, 8:47:14 AM
The only thing I am not ... is climbing up your leg. :P

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Be.
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